Player name: Kizaura
How long have you been a member of this project?: about 1-2 weeks
How old are you?:14
Where are you from?: Britain
Are you in our Discord?: yes
Why do you want to help with this project?:I would like to help with this project because of my interest in the cultural architecture in Tolkien’s world,I think if helping,I could really have fun helping other and building.
I also have admired tolkiens work for a very long time.
Which Tolkien-related works have you read, seen or listened to?: I have read all the books and watched all of the movies.
Are there any styles that you excel at? Any styles which you have difficulty with?:I can usually handle hobbit,dwarven and bree sort of builds.
I struggle with elven builds but I have been trying to learn
Other relevant skills: I can also do terrain details such as trees, and ground types.
This shows promise but there are a few issues.
Your ceilings are flat, and we don’t use clay for our ceilings either. Your ceilings are also rather low, we tend to use ceiling levels of 3+ blocks.
Your style is also something we don’t currently use. Id suggest warping to harlond and taking a look around there. Also check out the harlond thread on the forums.
Another issue is your interiors, they seem a little lack luster and could use some detailing.
I noticed your chimney also looks a bit wonky, kinda like what you would expect in Alice in Wonderland. I’d suggest keeping it simple and straight. Like you would expect in real life, we try to be realistic in how our structures are built.
I’d also like to see some windows on that building.
If you want my honest advice id start over and create a house more in our style. Your build isn’t bad it just doesn’t match the style, and realism of our server. Good luck!
Thank you for the feedback, I will be sure to make a more Harlond themed house later today!
That’s much better, I can’t see your interior very well due to your brightness settings, but the exterior is good. You have some mistakes here and there, however those can be fixed through experience. Overall good job with the exterior.
Better Pictures Of The Interior-> http://imgur.com/a/WNDzZ
Your interiors are heading in the right direction, you just need to learn how to do them.
Id suggest exploring some of the houses in Harlond, and looking at their interiors for ideas. Take each room slowly, and make sure your rooms have enough space to work with.
Your exterior is good, you just need to fix your interior. If you need any help I can demonstrate some technics, however I cannot build on your app for you.
Thanks for keeping at this, you’ve done more than most, and I’m sure you will do great on the interior!
One thing i’d like to mention is that your connected textures are not enabled, you can enable them through video options>details, this will help greatly for you since we use this feature a lot on our builds.
Thanks for the feedback,tomorrow I will be sure to update my interior and post it here, thanks!
I took a look at your plot and somehow your screenshots do no justice to your actual build. Or maybe you have updated it in the meanwhile, i don’t know. Regardless, it’s up to standard, which means you are hereby accepted. Welcome aboard!